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Nik Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct my essay.

The person that I enjoy talking is my grandmother. I like her for the reasons.
First of all, she is good at speaking history. I’m interested in hardship she got through in the past. For example, she tells me about the World War 2. She tells that they were short of food during the war.
The next reason that I enjoy talking to her is that she gives me snack and drink when we talk. For me, if we eat or drink anything, I enjoy talking more especially after study. For example, we can reduce stress and feel enjoyable during study or work. She knows the effect of snack and drink, and she suggests that we talk with snack when she understands that I’m tired of studying and need relaxation.
  

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Nik The person that I enjoy talking to is my grandmother. I like love her for the reasons because First of all, she is good at speaking history likes to talk about her past . I’m interested in the hardship s she got had to go through in the past when she was young .

  • Nik The person that I enjoy talking to is my grandmother.
  • I like love her for the reasons because First of all, she is good at speaking history likes to talk about her past .
  • I’m interested in the hardship s she got had to go through in the past when she was young .
  • For example, she tells me about the World War II .
  • She tells says that they were short of food during the war.
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Nik The person that I enjoy talking to is my grandmother. I like love her for the reasons because First of all, she is good at speaking history likes to talk about her past. I’m interested in the hardships she got had to go through in the past when she was

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