Please, correct my essay.

The problem that that woman is having is that she is going to have Italian Club party planned by the professor, however the party is boring.
One possible solution to her problem is that she should talk to the professor and she may be able to break it.
The second possible solution is that she will offer to plan the party this year.
My recommendation for the woman is offer to plan the party. This is the best solution for two reasons.
First, the woman will be able to make party. By doing this, she will be able to stimulate students.
Next, offering the party is a good idea because she doesn’t have to talk to the professor. This will help her not make the professor feel unpleasant.