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Nik Posted 14 years ago
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please, correct my essay.

I’d like to eat at the university cafeteria where I dine when I was a university student. The reason is that the cafeteria is open to people coming outside the university, and average price of each dish on menu is cheaper than that of ordinary restaurant. I usually consider cutting expense lunch as possible as I can for life, so that the cafeteria is the best place to have lunch economically. In addition, I can see professors who I have seen since I was a student. I can talk to them, while we eat lunch.
  

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Here are some suggestions: I’d like to eat at the university cafeteria where I dined when I was a university student. The reason is that the cafeteria is open to people coming from outside the university (open to the public) , and the average price of each dish on the menu is cheaper than that of ordinary restaurant s . I usually consider cutting my expense s lunch as far as possible as I can for life , so that the cafeteria is the most economical best place to have lunch economically .

  • Here are some suggestions: I’d like to eat at the university cafeteria where I dined when I was a university student.
  • The reason is that the cafeteria is open to people coming from outside the university (open to the public) , and the average price of each dish on the menu is cheaper than that of ordinary restaurant s .
  • I usually consider cutting my expense s lunch as far as possible as I can for life , so that the cafeteria is the most economical best place to have lunch economically .
  • In addition, I can see professors who (whom) I have known seen since I was a student.
  • I can talk to them ( No comma) while we eat lunch.
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Here are some suggestions:

I’d like to eat at the university cafeteria where I dined when I was a university student. The reason is that the cafeteria is open to people coming from outside the university (open to the public), and the average price of each dish on the menu is cheaper than that of ordinary restaurants. I usually consider cutting

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