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C.Ronaldo”I miss Ferguson and Manchester United”
Cristiano Ronaldo who is playing really well in Spain showded how much does he love Manchester United.
Ronaldo said”I played for Manchester United for 6 years so I felt like parting from families when I was leaving.”
He also added”I am still maintaining good relationship with Mr.Ferguson and some players,Such as Ferdinand, Nani,Aderson and Evra,I’m still chating with them.I really miss them as my family.” And he said”I also miss Mr. Ferguson who gave me energy when I had hard time”
Ronaldo transfered from Sporting(Portugal) to MU(England).He is playing for Real Madrid now.His team RealMadrid is looking forward to get their champion trophy back from Barcelona in 4 years and also entered into Semi Final of Champions League.They are having best season.
Is there any grammar errors or any word using incorrectly?
Cristiano Ronaldo who is playing really well in Spain showded how much does he love Manchester United.
Ronaldo said”I played for Manchester United for 6 years so I felt like parting from families when I was leaving.”
He also added”I am still maintaining good relationship with Mr.Ferguson and some players,Such as Ferdinand, Nani,Aderson and Evra,I’m still chating with them.I really miss them as my family.” And he said”I also miss Mr. Ferguson who gave me energy when I had hard time”
Ronaldo transfered from Sporting(Portugal) to MU(England).He is playing for Real Madrid now.His team RealMadrid is looking forward to get their champion trophy back from Barcelona in 4 years and also entered into Semi Final of Champions League.They are having best season.
Is there any grammar errors or any word using incorrectly?
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Cristiano Ronaldo , who is playing really well in Spain , showed how much he loves Manchester United. (Add commas because the subject here is identified) They are having the best season. *That's my opinion, you can ask the others for sure GN
- Cristiano Ronaldo , who is playing really well in Spain , showed how much he loves Manchester United.
- (Add commas because the subject here is identified) They are having the best season.
- *That's my opinion, you can ask the others for sure GN
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Cristiano Ronaldo, who is playing really well in Spain, showed how much he loves Manchester United. (Add commas because the subject here is identified)
They are having the best season.
*That's my opinion, you can ask the others for sure
They are having the best season.
*That's my opinion, you can ask the others for sure
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