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Nik Posted 14 years ago
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please, correct my essay.
According the recent study, young people today are breaking bones far more than kids did just 30 years ago. It turned out that there were 42 percent more broken arms in the more recent period. One possible explanation of this may be the increase in children’s activity level. Another problem may have to do with diet. There has been a considerable increase in the percentage of children drinking soda instead of juice or milk. One other major issue to consider is the increase in home entertainment. Nowadays there are video games, cable TV, DVD, recorders and computers that keep children in the house sitting on a chair.
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that keep(s) children in the house sitting on a chair. How does this increase in home entertainment, with children just sitting most of the time, relate to what is earlier in the paragraph about 'increase in broken bones'? )
- that keep(s) children in the house sitting on a chair.
- How does this increase in home entertainment, with children just sitting most of the time, relate to what is earlier in the paragraph about 'increase in broken bones'?
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One other major issue to consider is the increase in home entertainment..that keep(s) children in the house sitting on a chair.
How does this increase in home entertainment, with children just sitting most of the time, relate to what is earlier in the paragraph about 'increase in broken bones'?
How does this increase in home entertainment, with children just sitting most of the time, relate to what is earlier in the paragraph about 'increase in broken bones'?
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