please, correct my essay.

The problem is that the woman has to decide her minor, but she couldn’t have yet. The man suggests that the woman should choose Education because if she becomes a Sociology professor, she could use what she learned to make her class better. Another option is that she should choose Spanish because the woman if she becomes a social worker, she would be working with lots of Hispanic people.
In my opinion, I think that she should choose Education. The reason is that Education is the study that is learned only in university. If she miss the chance to learn the Education, it will be difficult to learn after graduation.