Please, correct my essay.

I support the opinion that all new drivers are required to attend driving school. The reason is that people may surely learn driving by themselves, but they have to learn also traffic rule. For example, in driving school teachers teach not only how to drive, but also gives advice of driving car teaching traffic rule. Actually, I think that it would cause troubles on the road if there weren’t driving schools. Orders would be ignored and more traffic accidents would happen. Thus, I believe that attending driving school is important for orders in our society.