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Nik Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please, correct my essay.

The problem is that the woman has to work on two assignments at the same time, but she cannot cope with those at once. The man suggests that she should skip a few nights of observations and work on her paper. Another option is that she should ask someone to give her the information of observation one night and she will log theirs the next night. I think that she should ask someone to give her the information one night. The reason is that without someone’s help she cannot complete both assignments. Although she skips a few nights of observations, astronomy project is supposed to be a log and it has to be done each day.
  

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The problem is that the woman has to work on two assignments at the same time, but she cannot cope with both at once. The man suggests that she should skip a few nights of observations and work on her paper. Another option is to ask someone to give her the observation information one night , and then she will log theirs the next night.

— Mister Micawber

  • The problem is that the woman has to work on two assignments at the same time, but she cannot cope with both at once.
  • The man suggests that she should skip a few nights of observations and work on her paper.
  • Another option is to ask someone to give her the observation information one night , and then she will log theirs the next night.
  • I think that she should take the latter option .
  • The reason is that without someone's help she will not be able to complete both assignments.
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The problem is that the woman has to work on two assignments at the same time, but she cannot cope with both at once. The man suggests that she should skip a few nights of observations and work on her paper. Another option is to ask someone to give her the observation information one night, and then she will log theirs the next night. I think that she should take th
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