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Nik Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please, correct my essay.

The man says that he doesn’t think it is fair that students should attend all classes. The woman, however, says that the teacher will teach based on material, so that students will miss important part of the material if they will be absent. Also, students can always get someone’s notes if they miss a class. The man is concerned that the teacher might give me a B because he doesn’t usually ask lots of questions. She retorts that the teacher wants only quality question. In addition, people who don’t ask questions in class can talk to the professor during office hours.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas, Nik. See if you can fix them. The man says that he doesn’t think it is fair that students should attend all classes.

  • I have underlined some problem areas, Nik.
  • See if you can fix them.
  • The man says that he doesn’t think it is fair that students should attend all classes.
  • The woman, however, says that the teacher will teach based on material, so that students will miss important part of the material if they will be absent.
  • Also, students can always get someone’s notes if they miss a class.
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I have underlined some problem areas, Nik. See if you can fix them.

The man says that he doesn’t think it is fair that students should attend all classes. The woman, however, says that the teacher will teach based on material, so that students will miss important part of the material if they will be absent. Also, students can always get someone’s note

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