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Nik Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please, correct my essay.

I think that it’s more effective that students for examinations alone. The reason is that if students make groups and study, they have different time to concentrate on studying. Some might stop studying halfway and want to do other things. In other words, studying in groups may prevent students who are eager to study from studying seriously. However, as far as students study alone, they don’t care about others around them. They can start studying whenever they want. They can choose time to quit studying. By studying alone, they can utilize time and study effectively, not being interrupted.
  

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Nik: Here are some suggestions. It seems to me that you use the word "study" too much. If you can find different expressions, your writing would improve.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Nik: Here are some suggestions.
  • It seems to me that you use the word "study" too much.
  • If you can find different expressions, your writing would improve.
  • I think that it’s more effective if that students prepare for examinations alone.
  • The reason is that if students make groups and study, they have a difficult different time concentrating to concentrate on studying .
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Nik:

Here are some suggestions. It seems to me that you use the word "study" too much. If you can find different expressions, your writing would improve.

I think that it’s more effective if that students prepare for examinations alone. The reason is that if students make groups and study, they have a difficult different time
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