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Nik Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please, correct my essay.

The problem is that the man is looking for reading material, but he has not found it yet. All of the reading material he’s looking for is out of print. The woman suggests that he will look for it via internet. Another option is that he’ll go to a used bookstore to find it. I think that the man should go to bookstore to find it. The reason is that he will be able to save money if he’ll choose to go to bookstore. According to her opinion, books in bookstore are cheaper than those of internet. Also, he said he didn’t have a lot of money.

  

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Nik The problem is that the man is looking for reading material, but he has not found it yet. All of the reading material he’s looking for is out of print. The woman suggests that he will look for it via internet.

— Red_Guitar_168

  • Nik The problem is that the man is looking for reading material, but he has not found it yet.
  • All of the reading material he’s looking for is out of print.
  • The woman suggests that he will look for it via internet.
  • Another option is that he’ll go to a used bookstore to find it.
  • I think that the man should go to bookstore to find it.
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Nik The problem is that the man is looking for reading material, but he has not found it yet. All of the reading material he’s looking for is out of print. The woman suggests that he will look for it via internet. Another option is that he’ll go to a used bookstore to find it. I think that the man should go to bookstore to find it. The reason is that he will be able t
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Hi,

Here are some edits.



The problem is that the man is looking for reading material, and everything he’s looking for is out of print. The woman suggests that he should look for it via the internet. Another option she suggests is that he should go to a used book store. I agree about the book store, because he will be able to save money if he chooses to do this. Accordi
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