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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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How can someome become a good doctor
Doctor is always important occupation . Because being healthy is desired by every man.So doctor should work carefully and responsibly.Doctor not only handle the disease but also the Life.Then good doctor is essential for our social.
A characteristic which " good doctor" should have is divided into 2 parts: Physical and Mental charateristics.Physical characteristic can improve your skill in medicine and make you more reliable.In other hands,physical characteristics include not only competence,smart but also strength,health and hygiene.Mental characteristics is also important because if you have good mental characteristics,you will promptly to improve and practice skills.Good doctor must have both characteristics due to work efficient.Mental characteristics consisted of many things such as compassion,commitment,honesty and empathy etc.
Man who want to be a good doctor rarely have all of characteristics.So the improvement is necessary.Physical characteristics can improve by more practicing,reading book,consulting professor,searching some related research.Moreover,mental characteristics ccould improve by meditation,consulting friends and reading "How to"books.
Please correct and show and error.... +_+!
Doctor is always important occupation . Because being healthy is desired by every man.So doctor should work carefully and responsibly.Doctor not only handle the disease but also the Life.Then good doctor is essential for our social.
A characteristic which " good doctor" should have is divided into 2 parts: Physical and Mental charateristics.Physical characteristic can improve your skill in medicine and make you more reliable.In other hands,physical characteristics include not only competence,smart but also strength,health and hygiene.Mental characteristics is also important because if you have good mental characteristics,you will promptly to improve and practice skills.Good doctor must have both characteristics due to work efficient.Mental characteristics consisted of many things such as compassion,commitment,honesty and empathy etc.
Man who want to be a good doctor rarely have all of characteristics.So the improvement is necessary.Physical characteristics can improve by more practicing,reading book,consulting professor,searching some related research.Moreover,mental characteristics ccould improve by meditation,consulting friends and reading "How to"books.
Please correct and show and error.... +_+!
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Henceforth, please submit your essays in the writing section. Thank you. Regards, Savvy
- Henceforth, please submit your essays in the writing section.
- Thank you.
- Regards, Savvy
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Hi Anonymous,
Welcome to the forums.We will correct your essay, however you have posted it in the wrong thread.Henceforth, please submit your essays in the writing section. Thank you.
Regards,
Savvy
Welcome to the forums.We will correct your essay, however you have posted it in the wrong thread.Henceforth, please submit your essays in the writing section. Thank you.
Regards,
Savvy
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Your title should be: What makes a good doctor
Medical treatment is a meticulous occupation .(delete Because) Being healthy is desired by every man,so a doctor should treat carefully and responsibly.A docto
Medical treatment is a meticulous occupation .(delete Because) Being healthy is desired by every man,so a doctor should treat carefully and responsibly.A docto
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