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Nik Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please, correct my esay.

The famous person I admire is Jackie Chan, who is an actor and director of movie from Hong Kong. The reason is that he has the talent as both an actor and director. He doesn’t use a stuntman for the scenes he plays as well. The fact makes me wonder how he makes films without a stuntman and why he does so. Although there are many dangerous action scenes in his films, it is admirable that he is particular about making films without a stuntman. In addition, although there are many action film directors, he is the only one who can do without stuntman.
  

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I have underlined some problems, Nik, and I have also struck out useless words. Please try to fix the problems and post your revised essay for our review: The famous person I admire is Jackie Chan, who is an actor and director of movie from Hong Kong. The reason is that he has the talent as both an actor and director.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problems, Nik, and I have also struck out useless words.
  • Please try to fix the problems and post your revised essay for our review: The famous person I admire is Jackie Chan, who is an actor and director of movie from Hong Kong.
  • The reason is that he has the talent as both an actor and director.
  • He doesn’t use a stuntman for the scenes he plays as well .
  • The fact makes me I wonder how he makes films without a stuntman and why he does so.
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I have underlined some problems, Nik, and I have also struck out useless words. Please try to fix the problems and post your revised essay for our review:

The famous person I admire is Jackie Chan, who is an actor and director of movie from Hong Kong. The reason is that he has the talent as both an actor and director. He doesn’t use a stu
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