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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Thank you for revenue list . The revenue will be passing to us this month is not enough .
Still a lot of job is outstanding . I am sending a new list including all the outstanding jobs. Please be aware that some job has not purchase number which you already have back up for it ,send to you 26/01/09
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Please correct my english - Thanks
Thank you for revenue list . The revenue will be passing to us this month is not enough .
Still a lot of job is outstanding . I am sending a new list including all the outstanding jobs. Please be aware that some job has not purchase number which you already have back up for it ,send to you 26/01/09
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Here is my revision- Thank you for the revenue list. The revenue will be passing to us this month is not enough. (This sentence is ambiguous.
- Here is my revision- Thank you for the revenue list.
- The revenue will be passing to us this month is not enough.
- (This sentence is ambiguous.
- Do you mean that the revenue generated is not enough or that the list is not enough and more information is needed?
- If generated revenue is not enough, you could say "This month's generated revenue does not meet target".
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Here is my revision-
Thank you for the revenue list. The revenue will be passing to us this month is not enough. (This sentence is ambiguous. Do you mean that the revenue generated is not enough or that the list is not enough and more information is needed? If generated revenue is not enough, you could say "This month's generated revenue does not meet target". If the list is not enough,
Thank you for the revenue list. The revenue will be passing to us this month is not enough. (This sentence is ambiguous. Do you mean that the revenue generated is not enough or that the list is not enough and more information is needed? If generated revenue is not enough, you could say "This month's generated revenue does not meet target". If the list is not enough,
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Okay, please look at my previous post then. The wording that I suggested should do.
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