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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Please correct my english. Thank you very much!

What makes you feel if your beau committed suicide for nothing, as in not any particular reason, when you’re not at hand besides her? We all know a grief-stricken person disregards anything; we all know heartbroken does not give much attempt in no matter which; we all know they stumble themselves on sharp knives, as a result they would be relieved. Those were the popular ideas mostly do whenever a person finds himself or she at pity state, in other words, despairing standing. Like what most said, right through the bond of Romeo and Juliet, love can last forever despite death. A love can last everlastingly although you conclude there is no redeeming grace exists. That’s why the lovers have won at the end of the story.



Irreplaceable between lovers can be found here. However, the Montages and the Caplets family contradict their love issue in spite of their approach between to each other. That was the lover’s weak point. To refrain from, Romeo and Juliet struggled for the sake of the affiliation of their love. They will carry out their effort to do anything that will certainly lend them a hand in which they can continue the genial flow of their affair.



In relation to a human experience, you’ll have to battle against love rival for your love to be united. Otherwise, futility will remain on your view. And of course if you have a thought of your bond affection before, it’s worthless as you didn’t executed much effort to resist against your foes for love, in the first place. Could you just imagine a broken heartened man could not carry out the fact that he didn’t fight for the fair dealing of the love of his love relative? A man can bear that shocking and heavy circumstance. He should have in any case fought for his rights that the woman he loved gave him reverences.



It was said, “It is better to be unloved, than to be loved.” The said quotation will release your ego of being dependent to your beliefs, which you would think what you’ve done – for letting the love go on the loose of false impression –, is prejudice.



It’s actually better to be unloved, than to be loved because if you’re on a recent state of affairs of a man, you’re hurt deeply inside your heart, which is difficult to carry out at the present time. Instead, if you’re on the circumstance of having unloved by no one, on the other hand, you could truly carry your self tenderly. Nevertheless, you shouldn’t accept the fact that you couldn’t take yourself to any further extent. Similar to what Romeo and Juliet did, they smacked through the complication they have experienced; consequently, they have won at the end of the narrative because their love last without end.
  

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You have a lot of structural and vocabulary errors, Anon. Are you teaching yourself English at home? I have underlined some of the main problem areas. See if you can find better ways to say them:

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