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I came across this news quite a while back. It’s heartbreaking to learn about sexual exploitations of children. All the pain and suffering they had to endure countless times due to the deceit and the lie from a group of profit making industry. They are so heartless enslaving kids for their sinful gains. The lives of these children had been robbed, terrorized and completely destroyed by these apathetic ghouls. It was because of the abject poverty and the innocent desire to better life, children were unwillingly agreed to leave their homes. These crooks would take their times to build trust with the families and to befriend with the weak and the poor as they are deceitfully making the empty promises.

I know for the fact that our Lao people are humble by nature if not culture. The meekness is a great virtue which they all live by it in the midst of people looking down on them. One day, Lao people either at home or abroad and with the grace of God, will overcome this great difficulty. Those girls, in my eyes, are my true heroes. Besides, money is not everything and success is not always determined by the amount of money you make, but it’s also determined by your purpose in life and if you have met any.