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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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1. My manager tole my colleague and I that we had to be more conscience of our proofreading because our reports had to many errors.
2. Readers want to scan messages quic therefore we should use every day language and be concise.
3. Even in europe and canada company executives are disapointed by messages that are to long an to difficult to read.
4. One managers report contained so many redudancys that it's main principals requesting State and Federal funding was lost.
5. You're writing will sound more fresher, if you eliminate trite business phases such as "pursuant to you're request.
6. All 3 of our companys recruiters: Angelica Santos, Kirk Adams, And David toms - critisized there poorly-written procedures.
7. To help recievers anticipate and comprehend ideas quick 2 special writing thecniques is helpful, parallalism which involves balanced writing and bulleting which make important points more visible.
8. When I proof read a important document I all ways work with a buddy, and read from a printed copy.
9. Read a message once for word meanings, read it again for grammer and mechanics.
10. Its all most impossible to improve one communication sills alone, therefore every one should take advatage of this educational oppertunity.
2. Readers want to scan messages quic therefore we should use every day language and be concise.
3. Even in europe and canada company executives are disapointed by messages that are to long an to difficult to read.
4. One managers report contained so many redudancys that it's main principals requesting State and Federal funding was lost.
5. You're writing will sound more fresher, if you eliminate trite business phases such as "pursuant to you're request.
6. All 3 of our companys recruiters: Angelica Santos, Kirk Adams, And David toms - critisized there poorly-written procedures.
7. To help recievers anticipate and comprehend ideas quick 2 special writing thecniques is helpful, parallalism which involves balanced writing and bulleting which make important points more visible.
8. When I proof read a important document I all ways work with a buddy, and read from a printed copy.
9. Read a message once for word meanings, read it again for grammer and mechanics.
10. Its all most impossible to improve one communication sills alone, therefore every one should take advatage of this educational oppertunity.
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1. My manager told my colleague and I that we had to be more conscience of our proofreading because our reports had too many errors. 2.
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- My manager told my colleague and I that we had to be more conscience of our proofreading because our reports had too many errors.
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- Readers want to scan messages quick, therefore we should use everyday language and be concise.
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1. My manager told my colleague and I that we had to be more conscience of our proofreading because our reports had too many errors.
2. Readers want to scan messages quick, therefore we should use everyday language and be concise.
3. Even in Europe and Canada compan
2. Readers want to scan messages quick, therefore we should use everyday language and be concise.
3. Even in Europe and Canada compan
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A few further corrections:
1. My manager told my colleague and me that we had to be more conscious of our proofreading because our reports had too many errors.
2. Readers want to scan messages quickly; therefore we should use everyday language and be concise.
4. One manager's report contained so many redundancies that its main points requestin
1. My manager told my colleague and me that we had to be more conscious of our proofreading because our reports had too many errors.
2. Readers want to scan messages quickly; therefore we should use everyday language and be concise.
4. One manager's report contained so many redundancies that its main points requestin
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