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Samirshk88 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my email

I have an e-mail an e-mail to a company represntative asking him about the announcement made by there company that they had released a software
Here is my mail, please correct my grammar mistakes

Dear Sir,
Hope this e-mail finds you well. We are ABCD Co located in KSA, Jeddah. I would like make some inquiries on a newly announced product XYZ by your company.

Here some of my concerns

- What is the release date of it ?
- We have HDX at our premises, how we can make use of it to place call from HDX endpoint to Skype users and vice versa
- What is the cost and how it can be purchased

I would greatly appreciate your reply.

Thanks
  

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samirshk88 Dear Sir, I hope this e-mail finds you well. We are ABCD Co, located in KSA, Jeddah. I would like to make some inquiries regarding your newly announced product, XYZ by your company .

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  • samirshk88 Dear Sir, I hope this e-mail finds you well.
  • We are ABCD Co, located in KSA, Jeddah.
  • I would like to make some inquiries regarding your newly announced product, XYZ by your company .
  • Here some of my concerns questions: What is the its release date of it ?
  • We have HDX at our premises , ; how we can make use of it to place a call from our HDX endpoint to Skype users and vice versa?
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samirshk88Dear Sir,
I hope this e-mail finds you well. We are ABCD Co, located in KSA, Jeddah. I would like to make some inquiries regarding your newly announced product, XYZ by your company. Here some of my concerns questions:
What is the its release date of it ?
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What is it meant by '...this email finds you well'? Is it common to say 'to find somebody well' among native speakers?
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