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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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please correct my email

0 Hi, i would appreciate if you could corect my email.02br
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00Hello,02br
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00 00Thank you for keeping me informed of positions available.02br
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00 00I am writing to you to let you know that there has been a slight change to when I 00 00can start a new job. As I was offered a temporary job I will not be able to start work until May4.02br
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00I look forward to hearing from you.02br
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0From the way you sounded, you have been offered a permanent position by a company but at the same time, you have accepted a temporary position with another company. 00 00Telling one employer to keep the position open for you while you are working for another is not a smart thing to do IMO. 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Dear ***02br 02br 00Thank you for allowing me the opportunity and keeping me informed of the available position.

  • 0From the way you sounded, you have been offered a permanent position by a company but at the same time, you have accepted a temporary position with another company.
  • 00 00Telling one employer to keep the position open for you while you are working for another is not a smart thing to do IMO.
  • 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Dear ***02br 02br 00Thank you for allowing me the opportunity and keeping me informed of the available position.
  • 02br 02br 00Due to unforeseen personal reasons, and with much regret, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to start the new job you have offered until May 401sup 00th..
  • 02sup 00 00I am sincerely hoping that you will grant me this extension until that time.
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0From the way you sounded, you have been offered a permanent position by a company but at the same time, you have accepted a temporary position with another company. Is this scenario correct?00 00Telling one employer to keep the position open for you while you are working for another is not a smart thing to do IMO. 02img

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