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Jess Katz Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Please: Correct my E-mail
I would to confirm that I have signed on the letter of employment which I agree on all its terms and condition. I will send you the requested photographs via DHL to your Hotel shortly.
Once, I get finished with my medical tests. I will send you the remaining documents including, The medical questionnaire, copies of the medical result, immigration form, scanned copy of my recent passport size photograph and a scanned original passport
Thank you for your consideration
Sincerely,
Once, I get finished with my medical tests. I will send you the remaining documents including, The medical questionnaire, copies of the medical result, immigration form, scanned copy of my recent passport size photograph and a scanned original passport
Thank you for your consideration
Sincerely,
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Dear Jess, this is a very good letter, however I (as a Brit) would write: I would like to confirm that I have signed the letter ..... and I agree to all the terms and conditions (You could also start this as a new sentence without "and" no comma after "Once" but comma instead of full stop after tests Once I am finished with my medical studies, I will ..... medical result s All the best, Mark Holmwood
- Dear Jess, this is a very good letter, however I (as a Brit) would write: I would like to confirm that I have signed the letter .....
- and I agree to all the terms and conditions (You could also start this as a new sentence without "and" no comma after "Once" but comma instead of full stop after tests Once I am finished with my medical studies, I will .....
- medical result s All the best, Mark Holmwood
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Dear Jess,
this is a very good letter, however I (as a Brit) would write:
I would like to confirm that I have signed the letter .....
and I agree to all the terms and conditions (You could also start this as a new sentence without "and"
no comma after "Once" but comma instead of full stop after tests
Once I am finished with my medical studies, I will .....
this is a very good letter, however I (as a Brit) would write:
I would like to confirm that I have signed the letter .....
and I agree to all the terms and conditions (You could also start this as a new sentence without "and"
no comma after "Once" but comma instead of full stop after tests
Once I am finished with my medical studies, I will .....
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(Corrections marked up by moderator KrisBlueNZ prior to posting.)
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Anonymous your welcome jess katzYou're welcome, jess katz. (Capitalization, proper contraction, and punctuation are important.)
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