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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct my business letter

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00Dear Sir/Madam02br
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00We greatly appreciate your quick response for your cost quotation of our audio equipment research in the Russian market.02br
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00After having several discussions with our client about the terms???,02br
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00we regrettably decided to ( accept / adopt ) another company's suggestion.02br
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00However, as your idea was also an excellent one,02br
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00if we have a similar ( case / project )??? in the near future, we would like to ask you02br
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00an inquiry??? about it.02br
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00We would like to maintain a good relationship with you,02br
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00Best Regards,0-
  

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10I'd like you to correct the following business letter. 10 10--12br 10Dear11u 10 Sir/Madam12u 10 11font 10[Since you have already had correspondence, you must surely have a name to write to]12font 12br 12br 10 10 12br 11b 10We greatly appreciate your quick response and your quotation for our audio equipment research in the Russian market. However, after discussion with our client, we have decided on this occasion not to accept your offer.

— Feebs11

  • 10I'd like you to correct the following business letter.
  • 10 10--12br 10Dear11u 10 Sir/Madam12u 10 11font 10[Since you have already had correspondence, you must surely have a name to write to]12font 12br 12br 10 10 12br 11b 10We greatly appreciate your quick response and your quotation for our audio equipment research in the Russian market.
  • However, after discussion with our client, we have decided on this occasion not to accept your offer.
  • 12b 12br 11b 10Nevertheless, if in future we have a similar project, we will certainly approach you to discuss it.
  • 12b 12br 11b 10With best wishes, 12b 12br 11b 10 12b 12br 11b 10Yours sincerely.
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01cite10Anonymous12cite10Hi, could you do me a favor?10I'd like you to correct the following business letter. 10I wrote '???' where I'm not sure.10 10--12br
10Dear11u10 Sir/Madam12u10 11font10[Since you have already had correspondence, you must surely have a
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0Feebs11, thank you for correcting my letter.02br
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00The letter reads far better.0-
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