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Dreams... they have fascinated me for some time now and then. Everything about them, whether they are symbolic, important, residual, totally abstract, chaotic, influential, subconscious, or non residual, etc. I look to dreaming as something of an enigma, why would we sleep for at least a third of our lives, if dreaming was not important? It holds in its folded and often illogical reasons and dimensions some other perspective, where we can experience abstract constructs.
As a child, we are always asked - what do you want to be when you grow up? The average kid usually says a police officer, a fireman, a nurse, a doctor, an astronaut... that kind of thing. We all have dreams and let's face it, dreams are free, so why not?
I was one of those children who had a variety of things I wanted to be when I grew up. From DON, Politician to Rockstar...ahh how versatile I was!! . As a child I was like, I have one dream, I follow it and the very next moment realizes that it's not my cup of tea and again start knitting the new one...that's how I spend my childhood.
When I was small, I had a passion to be a DON. I don't know why I had such a wired idea on my subconscious mind? Might be the movie "DON" which was haunting my mind. Every street and galli the poster of Amitab Bachha, small to old use to talk about the movie, "Don ta babal cha ni" what a movie!! The famous movie dialogue, "don ko pakadna muskil he nahi namumkin vi hai". Doesn't it sound fascinating? Time passes by, the summer, the rainy, the spring, the winter. Things go on, time's changing making the new me, the new thoughts, the new way to see the things. Then I realize to give up the DON thing. And again who stops the dreamer me, back to the business, the dreamer's dream. Now I wanted to be politician and used to say that, I would be a great leader and my voting sign would be Elephant. My slogan was "Hatti sabai ko sathi, huncha sabai ko jaati ". I thought, what a better way to show that! The politician idea clicked on my mind because it was a pre-election time and the entire political leader used to visit houses and localities to ask for a vote. They were surrounded by peoples. The peoples used to follow them like their leader and I was fascinated with the way they promise things to the people. Later on I realize those politicians are good at making speech rather than doing works. I gave up the thought. In this way I grow up making and breaking the dream of my life.
Clicked Again? I wanna be a Rock star! Sounds cool, but becoming a super rock star not knowing I have no talent for music...Those were all my dreams ...my dreams, from the very small to the all-encompassing, have guided my life. Believing in them, even when life seemed impossible, has given me focus over the years.
I often ask question with myself, why is it that people don't set goals that seem impossible? Could it be because as children we have had all the imagination and drive knocked out of us! How many times were we told by our parent's or teacher's, stop day dreaming, the dream you won't achieve!!
As a result we set the goals that were safe, goals that were achievable with little effort, focus and most importantly passion...
A lot can change between now and then. A wise man once told me, "The only certainty in life is change." But all disappointment aside I am still young enough to pursue whatever dream I choose and I will do so when and if the time is right.
In my line of life and visualizations everything became so clear and interesting. Growing old showed me the values of how and what I need to do to achieve my happy little success story and far out dreams. Although I've yet to become the final formation of who I'll become I do keep in mind that every second is a waste till I'm where I wanted to be
If there's one thing I've ever learned it's that you got to work to your fullest towards something if you really want it, and when you get, it becomes well worth your satisfaction. The most satisfaction you'll ever get out of yourself is your deepest desires that you dream of everyday. For now I'll dream of my beach house, job, car, and fairytale lifestyle but when the time comes I'll know to hit a direct approach and make the move for there's no greater necessity's then my own and dreams are your own reality every day, if there's anyone you can trust it's yourself. If history repeats itself at least I'll know that times just a clock and life's a never ending road of enormous possibilities with equations that can be solved with a little work and practice.

Sulav Nepal
  
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