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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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please correct my appointment message

Billy advise me to told you that he will come to our China office on next Thursday & Friday (28 and 29 February) and he has make this appointment with Connie yesterday.
  

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Hi, Billy advise me to told you that he will come to our China office on next Thursday & Friday (28 and 29 February) and he has make this appointment with Connie yesterday. Billy advised me to tell you that he will come to our China office next Thursday and Friday (28 and 29 February), and that he made this appointment with Connie yesterday. Best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Billy advise me to told you that he will come to our China office on next Thursday & Friday (28 and 29 February) and he has make this appointment with Connie yesterday.
  • Billy advised me to tell you that he will come to our China office next Thursday and Friday (28 and 29 February), and that he made this appointment with Connie yesterday.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Billy advise me to told you that he will come to our China office on next Thursday & Friday (28 and 29 February) and he has make this appointment with Connie yesterday.


Billy advised me to tell you that he will come to our China office next Thursday and Friday (28 and 29 February), and that he made this appointment with Connie yesterday.
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Hi Clive,

Thanks for your correction. Could you please correct me one more for this sentence :

Billy has requested that I inform you that he will visit our office in China next Thursday and Friday. He made the appointment with Connie yesterday. - Is this also correct ? But sounds not nature.

Thank you

Clara
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Hi Clara,

I'm not Clive, but perhaps you don't mind.

Your second version is fine too.

Another way to say it, which is more informal, is: Billy asked me to let you know that he will visit..
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Thanks GG

I'm worried about that, because I has been sent the second message to my boss before Clive's helped.

Always, thanks you and Clive again

Have a nice weekend

Clara
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Hi all,

I have some queries, for

1) which version is sounds better ?

a. Billy advised me to tell you that he will come to ....

b. Billy has requested that I inform you that he will visit ...........

c. Billy asked me to let you know that he will visit.........

2) it should say the office in China or China office ?

Ruby
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Hi,

I have some queries, for

1) which version is sounds better ?

a. Billy advised me to tell you that he will come to .. OK, but 'advise' is not the same as 'request' or 'tell'.

b. Billy has requested that I inform you that he will visit .. Sou
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