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Zuzi Lopez del Castillo Cardet Posted 14 years ago
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That year I left my country and moved to Miami, FL here in the states. Later in June 2012 I moved again, this time from Miami to New york,because my father is doing his Medicine Residency in Texas Tech so all family is here now.
  

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I have underlined some problems areas. Please correct them and repost: That year I left my country and moved to Miami, FL here in the states . Late r in June 201 2 I m oved again, this time from Miami to New york , because my father is doing his Medicine Residency in Texas Te ch s o all family is here now.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problems areas.
  • Please correct them and repost: That year I left my country and moved to Miami, FL here in the states .
  • Late r in June 201 2 I m oved again, this time from Miami to New york , because my father is doing his Medicine Residency in Texas Te ch s o all family is here now.
  • Also, the sentence does not make sense: all the family cannot be in Texas because you are in New York.
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I have underlined some problems areas. Please correct them and repost:

That year I left my country and moved to Miami, FL here in the states. Later in June 2012 I moved again, this time from Miami to New york, because my father is doing his Medicine Residency in Texas Tech so all family is here now.

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