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1. My plan after graduation is to become a reliable engineer in particular areas of technology. By learning the techniques in Turkey I will be a creative, innovative and able to resolve the problem of long-term issues facing the world. As well as being the outstanding academic field that will provide positive effect on the environment and be the best leader. also be a cooperative and adaptive, curious-minded students. other than that I also want to implement the culture that I receive in Turkey, so that fraternal relations between countries are becoming increasingly close.

2. I know turkey for a long time, and I see turkey is a country that excel in education. It is undeniable that the Turkish state made its mark in the history of education in the world. Thus, many Turks also produce extraordinary discovery, especially in the field of technology which is certainly encouraging. Turkey also have many lecturers were very remarkable in the field of technology. Besides, turkey has many outstanding universities such as University of istanbul. Founded in the 14th century and became one of the best and oldest universities in the world.
While studying in Turkey I hope to be accepted in science or engineering majors. Because I know that the department has been recognized by the world. Supported by advanced technology and a number of educational technology research conducted. I'm sure if I accepted. I would contribute a lot for my nation.