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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
please correct me if i am writing wrongs
Hi Sir,
Warm Greetings.
I would like to introduce myself to you my name is xxxxx and am an experienced Sales & Marketing professional having six years of exposure to operations in the Retail sector with several reputed/major organizations in UK & US . Presently, I am serving with major promotional product supplier in UAE, as Marketing Manager, please refer my previous company /
Professionally, I am qualified with Bachelor of Business Management and Multimedia (web and graphic design) so i will do all the company design works, like catalogue, brochure, leaflet, business card and website etc. i think this is the second benefits for us. I will manage all category like business development, sales , marketing, production etc. so please find my business proposal PDF attached herewith for your kind reference.
Awaiting your earliest response on the same.
For further clarification please don't hesitate to contact me.
Best regards
Warm Greetings.
I would like to introduce myself to you my name is xxxxx and am an experienced Sales & Marketing professional having six years of exposure to operations in the Retail sector with several reputed/major organizations in UK & US . Presently, I am serving with major promotional product supplier in UAE, as Marketing Manager, please refer my previous company /
Professionally, I am qualified with Bachelor of Business Management and Multimedia (web and graphic design) so i will do all the company design works, like catalogue, brochure, leaflet, business card and website etc. i think this is the second benefits for us. I will manage all category like business development, sales , marketing, production etc. so please find my business proposal PDF attached herewith for your kind reference.
Awaiting your earliest response on the same.
For further clarification please don't hesitate to contact me.
Best regards
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I'm a native English speaker in the US, and this is how I would revise it, based on my understanding of the content of what you've written: Warm greetings: Let me introduce myself to you. My name is ______. I'm an experienced Sales and Marketing professional, with six years of progressively responsible experience in the retail sector, at ______ in the UK, and at ______ in the United States.
- I'm a native English speaker in the US, and this is how I would revise it, based on my understanding of the content of what you've written: Warm greetings: Let me introduce myself to you.
- My name is ______.
- I'm an experienced Sales and Marketing professional, with six years of progressively responsible experience in the retail sector, at ______ in the UK, and at ______ in the United States.
- Presently, I am Marketing Manager at ______ , a major promotional product supplier in the United Arab Emirates.
- I hold a Bachelors Degree in Management and Multimedia Design (web and graphic design), from ____ University.
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I'm a native English speaker in the US, and this is how I would revise it, based on my understanding of the content of what you've written:
Warm greetings:
Let me introduce myself to you. My name is ______. I'm an experienced Sales and Marketing professional, with six years of progressively responsible experience in the retail sector, at ______ in the UK, and at ______ in
Warm greetings:
Let me introduce myself to you. My name is ______. I'm an experienced Sales and Marketing professional, with six years of progressively responsible experience in the retail sector, at ______ in the UK, and at ______ in
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Terms like Hi, warm greetings. with best regards are all informal, and sound to me like you are writing casually to your friend.
A more formal start is 'Dear Sir/Madam', and an ending is 'Yours sincerely'.
When I started reading your letter, I thought you were applying for a job. My advice is that you should begin by saying briefly why you are writing to this person. This is the
A more formal start is 'Dear Sir/Madam', and an ending is 'Yours sincerely'.
When I started reading your letter, I thought you were applying for a job. My advice is that you should begin by saying briefly why you are writing to this person. This is the
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