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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Please correct me

When I got down to dinner my dad was looking very despondent. Apparently it was all just for me because my mom had called and told him that Tony had broken up with me. It was just pathetic because I knew that he was happy on the inside that I wasn't with him anymore.

Is "apparently it was all just for me" ok here? And the rest?

I appreciate it. Thank you.

  
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