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Selva Bloom Posted 10 years ago
Business & Finance

please correct me

i wrote some sentence for advertismant for my business. please correct that and make it more attractive.

"get a onlline tution for all subjects by (company name). make it easy and enjoy to learn! Signup now for a free class! "
  

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I wrote some sentence s for an advertisem e nt for my business. P lease correct th em and make it more attractive. "G et a online tu i tion for (or in ) all subjects by from (or at ) (company name).

— Blue Jay

  • I wrote some sentence s for an advertisem e nt for my business.
  • P lease correct th em and make it more attractive.
  • "G et a online tu i tion for (or in ) all subjects by from (or at ) (company name).
  • M ake it easy and enjoyable to learn (or Make learning easy and enjoyable ) !
  • "
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