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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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i want to write invitation letter is this correct??

The Purpose of this letter is to formally Invite you, on behalf of the member of UEA EMS and dubi Fire & Rescue Department to training and share your talents and expertise from April20-April 30,2014 .

During this time you will observe with The paramedic staff of life 1 and life 4 , and Respond to The 911 calls for the City of dubi , also You will attend PHTLS course .

We truly look forward to your visit .

Yours sincerely,
  

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On behalf of the members of the UEA EMS and the Dubí Fire and Rescue Department, I would like to cordially invite you to our training seminar, which is scheduled April 20–30, 2014. You will take part in the observation of Life 1 and Life 4, respond to 911 calls, and attend a PHTLS course. We look forward to your participation in this training class.

— Goronsky

  • On behalf of the members of the UEA EMS and the Dubí Fire and Rescue Department, I would like to cordially invite you to our training seminar, which is scheduled April 20–30, 2014.
  • You will take part in the observation of Life 1 and Life 4, respond to 911 calls, and attend a PHTLS course.
  • We look forward to your participation in this training class.
  • Sincerely,
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On behalf of the members of the UEA EMS and the Dubí Fire and Rescue Department, I would like to cordially invite you to our training seminar, which is scheduled April 20–30, 2014.


You will take part in the observation of Life 1 and Life 4, respond to 911 calls, and attend a PHTLS course.


We look forward to your participation in this training class.
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