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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct me -

Dear Sir,
yesterday I received the following email from Papilon VIP Catering company, for further discussion they want to meet you. thanks
  

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Dear Sir, Yesterday, I received the following email from Papilon VIP Catering company; for further discussion, they want to meet you. Thanks The comma that I put in is not needed. So if you do not like it there; it can be taken out.

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  • Dear Sir, Yesterday, I received the following email from Papilon VIP Catering company; for further discussion, they want to meet you.
  • Thanks The comma that I put in is not needed.
  • So if you do not like it there; it can be taken out.
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Dear Sir,
Yesterday, I received the following email from Papilon VIP Catering company; for further discussion, they want to meet you. Thanks

The comma that I put in is not needed. So if you do not like it there; it can be taken out.
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The comma after yesterday.
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