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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please correct me

Hi teachers,

Can you correct this letter please? It is really important for me.

To the attention to Carl Williams, Course Coordinator.

I am very interested in the four weeks course.

I need additional information, like, the time of the course, paperwork I must do to take the four weeks course, etc

Waiting for your quick response

Yours sincerely

Thanks in advance
  

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Hi, Can you correct this letter please? It is really important for me. To the attention to Carl Williams, Course Coordinator.

— Clive

  • Hi, Can you correct this letter please?
  • It is really important for me.
  • To the attention to Carl Williams, Course Coordinator.
  • I am very interested in the four weeks course.
  • I need additional information, like, the time of the course, paperwork I must do to take the four weeks course, etc Waiting for your quick response <<<< This sounds very peremptory to me.
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Hi,

Can you correct this letter please? It is really important for me.

To the attention to Carl Williams, Course Coordinator.

I am very interested in the four weeks course.

I need additional information, like, the time of the course, paperwork I must do to take the four weeks course, etc

Waiting for your quick
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Thank you very much for your commentaries and help Clive.
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