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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, we still waiting for your shipping order, please release it to us ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee
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Hi, The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, we still waiting for your shipping orde, please release it to us ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee I've marked in pink a few places where you have errors, so that you can try to correct them.
- Hi, The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept.
- However, we still waiting for your shipping orde, please release it to us ASAP.
- Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee I've marked in pink a few places where you have errors, so that you can try to correct them.
- Put a period at the end of every sentence.
- Clive.
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Hi,
The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, we still waiting for your shipping orde, please release it to us ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee
I've marked in pink a few places where you have errors, so that you can try to correct them.
Put a period at the end of every sentence.
The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, we still waiting for your shipping orde, please release it to us ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee
I've marked in pink a few places where you have errors, so that you can try to correct them.
Put a period at the end of every sentence.
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Here is my correction, please review and correct it again. Thanks
The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, you still not release your shipping order to us. Please send it ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee
The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, you still not release your shipping order to us. Please send it ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee
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Hi again,
The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, you have still not released your shipping order to us. Please send it ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee.
I've noticed that in many of your posts, you add a sentence starting with please on to the previous sentence.
eg You have
The lastest shipment date shown on the LC is 15 Sept. However, you have still not released your shipping order to us. Please send it ASAP. Otherwise, we shall charge you back for the LC discrepancy fee.
I've noticed that in many of your posts, you add a sentence starting with please on to the previous sentence.
eg You have
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