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Crespo Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct me

Please correct the following statement.

"My Interest in science dates back to my secondary school days where I excelled in science subjects. After graduating from the junior school, I opted for sciences for my senior school programme where I took science subjects like Mathematics, Physics Chemistry and Biology for 3 years

I look forward to your reply.
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I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words. "My Interest in science dates back to my secondary school days where I excelled in science subjects. After graduating from the junior school, I opted for sciences for my senior school programme where I took science subjects like Mathematics, Physics Chemistry and Biology for 3 years.

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  • I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words.
  • "My Interest in science dates back to my secondary school days where I excelled in science subjects.
  • After graduating from the junior school, I opted for sciences for my senior school programme where I took science subjects like Mathematics, Physics Chemistry and Biology for 3 years.
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I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words.

"My Interest in science dates back to my secondary school days where I excelled in science subjects. After graduating from the junior school, I opted for sciences for my senior school programme where I took science subjects like Mathematics, Physics Chemistry a
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