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RasoolAsal Posted 8 years ago
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Please correct mar quick lecture gramerly

Researching on animals for developing new medicine is important for human being in these decades that new disease advents by passing time. For Instance, The Worldwide Unique Medicine Inc, reported 50 new human viruses that hasn’t any treatment yet. It can be argued that experiment on animals may be cruel but I think human being is more important. In conclusion animals should be in the hand of man for people survival.

  

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Your essay is far too short, Rasool. You need more ideas, more details, and more examples.

  • Your essay is far too short, Rasool.
  • You need more ideas, more details, and more examples.
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Your essay is far too short, Rasool. You need more ideas, more details, and more examples.

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do that had any mistake?

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I highlighted some of the mistakes in your text. the text

Researching on animals for developing new medicine is important for human being in these decades that new disease advents

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