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Sundar100 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Please correct. It's very embarrassing that my application is processed in a slow speed.

It’s very embarrassing that my application is processed in a very slow speed thus making unreasonable delay in obtaining my passport even after I have promptly answered all the requests for more information.
  

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Hi, Sundar. I'm not sure how to help you. There are only a couple of small errors, but it would read better as two sentences.

  • Hi, Sundar.
  • I'm not sure how to help you.
  • There are only a couple of small errors, but it would read better as two sentences.
  • But I don't understand the thrust of your objection.
  • Is this real, or just an exercise you made up?
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Hi, Sundar.
I'm not sure how to help you. There are only a couple of small errors, but it would read better as two sentences.

But I don't understand the thrust of your objection. Is this real, or just an exercise you made up? If I received your letter, I'd try to see that your application found it's way into the trash bin.

Either way, it seems that you have only embarrass

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