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Musthakahmed1 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

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Ms. Millette P. Villaram Stated that Ms. Maryland was working with her as Promotion Supervisor .

Mrs. Millette P. Villaram stated that she and her friend were the partnership of Consumer Unlimited Services. Her friend left for US for other business purpose. So she shutdown the operation of this company as there was nobody to look after this business.
  

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  • Villaram stated that Ms.
  • Maryland was working with her as a Promotion Supervisor, and that they were also partners in the Consumer Unlimited Services.
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Ms. Millette P. Villaram stated that Ms. Maryland was working with her as a Promotion Supervisor, and that they were also partners in the Consumer Unlimited Services. However, Ms. Maryland has left for US for other business purposes, so Ms. Villaram has shutdown the operation of this company as there was nobody to look after this business.

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