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Nour Alzahraa Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

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Teaching kindergarten is really fun and you will enjoy your time with small kids. You will not get bored anymore .
  

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Good. You have three clauses. The second and third are more closely related than the first two, so you might consider dividing them up into sentences differently: Teaching kindergarten is really fun.

— CalifJim

  • Good.
  • You have three clauses.
  • The second and third are more closely related than the first two, so you might consider dividing them up into sentences differently: Teaching kindergarten is really fun.
  • You'll enjoy your time with small kids, and you won't be bored anymore.
  • CJ
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Good.

You have three clauses. The second and third are more closely related than the first two, so you might consider dividing them up into sentences differently:

Teaching kindergarten is really fun.  You'll enjoy your time with small kids, and you won't be bored anymore.

CJ

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