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Veera raju Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please correct it

Hi all, Please give me your suggestions where the updations needed in the below sentence.
""I am very much happy to share my personal experiences with you.
At my childhood days, I remembered that I used to go to school by bus.
It was hardly more than two hours journey from my hometown to school." - Does it sounds grammatically ok?.

Thanks in advance.
  

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I am very happy to share my personal experiences with you. (I assume that "experiences" refer to something you experienced as a child; whether it is an event, a situation, an adventure etc) In my childhood days, I remember that I used to go to school by bus. It was hardly more than a two-hour journey/drive from my hometown to school.

— Ivanhr

  • I am very happy to share my personal experiences with you.
  • (I assume that "experiences" refer to something you experienced as a child; whether it is an event, a situation, an adventure etc) In my childhood days, I remember that I used to go to school by bus.
  • It was hardly more than a two-hour journey/drive from my hometown to school.
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I am very happy to share my personal experiences with you. (I assume that "experiences" refer to something you experienced as a child; whether it is an event, a situation, an adventure etc)

In my childhood days, I remember that I used to go to school by bus.

It was hardly more than a two-hour journey/drive from my hometown to school.
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