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Starkhan Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct it.

The five points where I am lacking behind it
I am not truly sure that where I am lacking behind, however after giving a slightly thinking over this major problem I came to know these following issues.
1.Vocabulary: The very first area where I think that I should improve is vocabulary problem. Whenever I try to make a lengthy sentence I could not find a rich number of vocabularies so that I can express my views in a good and impressive manner.
2.The second area is making sense of long sentences while reading the various Newspapers especially editorial pages of them and articles on various topics.
3.The third one is getting stuck and a little bit uncomforted while interacting with people in order to explain any topic or having common conversation.
4.The fourth one is being unable to express some specific areas of sentences like conditional sentences or when try to express wishes or describing an imaginary situation.
5.The last one is not being capable to compose a long story, essays or letters to editors and answering the exam's papers although I have the idea in mind.

You people are requested to correct it in all aspects please.
  

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The five areas points where I am lagging lacking behind it (You can use "lagging behind" or "lacking" - without "behind") I am not truly sure that where I am lagging lacking behind, however after giving a slightly thinking over some thought to this major problem , I came to know the se following issues. Vocabulary: The very first area where I think that I should improve is my vocabulary problem . Whenever I try to make a lengthy sentence I could can not find a rich number of vocabular y ies words so that I can express my views in a good and impressive manner.

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  • The five areas points where I am lagging lacking behind it (You can use "lagging behind" or "lacking" - without "behind") I am not truly sure that where I am lagging lacking behind, however after giving a slightly thinking over some thought to this major problem , I came to know the se following issues.
  • Vocabulary: The very first area where I think that I should improve is my vocabulary problem .
  • Whenever I try to make a lengthy sentence I could can not find a rich number of vocabular y ies words so that I can express my views in a good and impressive manner.
  • The second area is making sense of long sentences while reading the various n ewspapers , especially the editorial pages of them and articles on various topics.
  • The third one is getting stuck and feeling a little bit uncomfort able ed while interacting with people in order to explain any topic or when having an ordinary common conversation.
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The five areas points where I am lagging lacking behind it (You can use "lagging behind" or "lacking" - without "behind")

I am not truly sure that where I am lagging lacking behind, however after giving a slightly thinking over some thought to this major problem, I came to know the
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Let me say a million of thanks for rechecking my writing.
I am really very happy and delighted to know my errors.
This is first time when some body has given me such positive respond.
Fell free to correct my any error minor or mejor it does not matter at all.
Have a nice day.
I have posted an other please check that also if you u can.
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