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Sdhmech Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
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0 Dear Sir 02 br
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00 I am new to this english forum. I am very much weak in writing business letter. please correct below letter. Thanks in advance. 02 br
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00 Hello Mr.John 02 br
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00 Well and Wish the same from you. This is regarding Spider Instrument. 02 br
00 As per our last telephonic discussion, you told that your financial department will contact us for further process. 02 br
00 Still I didnt receive any call from them. Kindly update me the status about that. 02 br
00 If it is possible, please give me your financial department contacts. 02 br
00 I am sorry to distrub you again. Kindly help me out this issue. 02 br
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00 Thanks for your kind attention. 02 br
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00 Regards, 02 br
00 Sdhmech 0-
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00 I am new to this english forum. I am very much weak in writing business letter. please correct below letter. Thanks in advance. 02 br
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00 Hello Mr.John 02 br
02 br
00 Well and Wish the same from you. This is regarding Spider Instrument. 02 br
00 As per our last telephonic discussion, you told that your financial department will contact us for further process. 02 br
00 Still I didnt receive any call from them. Kindly update me the status about that. 02 br
00 If it is possible, please give me your financial department contacts. 02 br
00 I am sorry to distrub you again. Kindly help me out this issue. 02 br
02 br
00 Thanks for your kind attention. 02 br
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00 Regards, 02 br
00 Sdhmech 0-
Top answer
John 02 br 02 br 00 The letter should start 'Dear Mr X' or 'Dear John'. Is John his first name or surname? 02 br 02 br 00 Well and Wish the same from you.
- John 02 br 02 br 00 The letter should start 'Dear Mr X' or 'Dear John'.
- Is John his first name or surname?
- 02 br 02 br 00 Well and Wish the same from you.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I am writing regarding the Spider Instrument.
- During our last telephone discussion, you told me that your financial department would contact us for further (process.
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0 Hello Mr.John 02 br
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00 The letter should start 'Dear Mr X' or 'Dear John'. Is John his first name or surname? We only use Mr with surnames. 02 br
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00 Well and Wish the same from you. (ungrammatical but not appropriate for a business letter anyway). 02 br
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00 I am writing regarding the Spider Instrument. During our last telephone di
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00 The letter should start 'Dear Mr X' or 'Dear John'. Is John his first name or surname? We only use Mr with surnames. 02 br
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00 Well and Wish the same from you. (ungrammatical but not appropriate for a business letter anyway). 02 br
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00 I am writing regarding the Spider Instrument. During our last telephone di
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0 THANK YOU VERY MUCH. 02 br
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00 Instead of Well and Wish the same from you.. What I can write? Any suggestions 0-
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00 Instead of Well and Wish the same from you.. What I can write? Any suggestions 0-
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0 You don't need to write anything in its place. It's not appropriate for a business letter to be talking about health. 0-
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