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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
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Dear Mr. Z
I tried to reach you today 3rd) by phone via your secretary but was unsuccessful. I wanted to talk to you about our products / services.
We understand today's demanding market and because we value our customer satisfaction, we have developed a Special Pricing for your company.
Attached please find special pricing for the ABC Company
I also would like to take this opportunity and introduce to you our new product - Player. This new product will be launched in January 2011. Please note this is only a demo.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as convenient.
Sincerely,
I tried to reach you today 3rd) by phone via your secretary but was unsuccessful. I wanted to talk to you about our products / services.
We understand today's demanding market and because we value our customer satisfaction, we have developed a Special Pricing for your company.
Attached please find special pricing for the ABC Company
I also would like to take this opportunity and introduce to you our new product - Player. This new product will be launched in January 2011. Please note this is only a demo.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as convenient.
Sincerely,
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas: Dear Mr Z, I tried to reach you today 3rd) by phone via your secretary but was unsuccessful. I wanted to talk to you about our product s / services. We understand today's demanding mar ket a nd because we value our customer satisfaction, we have developed a Special Pricing for your company (attached).
- I have underlined some problem areas: Dear Mr Z, I tried to reach you today 3rd) by phone via your secretary but was unsuccessful.
- I wanted to talk to you about our product s / services.
- We understand today's demanding mar ket a nd because we value our customer satisfaction, we have developed a Special Pricing for your company (attached).
- I also would like to take this opportunity and introduce to you our new product , Player , which will be launched in January 2011.
- Please note this is only a demo.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
Dear Mr Z,
I tried to reach you today 3rd) by phone via your secretary but was unsuccessful. I wanted to talk to you about our products / services. We understand today's demanding market and because we value our customer satisfaction, we have developed a Special Pricing for your company (attached
Dear Mr Z,
I tried to reach you today 3rd) by phone via your secretary but was unsuccessful. I wanted to talk to you about our products / services. We understand today's demanding market and because we value our customer satisfaction, we have developed a Special Pricing for your company (attached
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