For lists, it's much easier to answer if the examples have a number. 1 - comma after vegetable 3 - comma instead of semi-colon 4 - either 5 - tardiness 6 - either 7 - commas after was 8 - 'squeeze' isn't right, but I'm not sure what to offer 11 - comma after dead 12 - It's vague. Is the depression a state of the economy or an emotional state?
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