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Have you ever helped a friend or family member in need? or even a stranger? you probly did this out of good inten and wanted to be a good samaritan. Well, I applaud you! well done! Ida is 5'3 in height, with long black hair, light brown eyes and a heart of gold. Ida happen to be my first cousin on my mothers side. Ida is a softearhted person who always do anything she can to help anyone in need it could be a friend, family memver, or a stranger it don't matter to Ida.

As a child Ida was very helpful in school. Ida and I went to grade school to together, we where in the sixth grade class. As a child in school, Ida was always willing to help the other children with there school work. For example, in school Ida would never thrun anyone away who came to her for help with their school work. She would always help them being the softhearted person she is. If you think of time where you helped somone, be it a friend. family member, they usually come back again and again when the required assistance, and earch time they comeyou help them, that's how Ida is if she can hel she will.

As Ida got older she continued to be softhearted and willing to help friends, family members, and even strnagers. Ida has always been someone you could count on for support. For instance every summer Ida would baby sit for her aunt and not charge her anything, because Ida love hleping out family.

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Have you ever helped a friend or family member in need? or even a stranger? you probly did this out of good inten and wanted to be a good samaritan. Well, I applaud you! well done! Ida is 5'3 in height, with long black hair, light brown eyes and a heart of gold. Ida happen to be my first cousin on my mothers side. Ida is a softearhted person who always do anything she can to help anyone in need it could be a friend, family memver, or a stranger it don't matter to Ida.

As a child Ida was very helpful in school. Ida and I went to grade school to together, we where in the sixth grade class. As a child in school, Ida was always willing to help the other children with there school work. For example, in school Ida would never thrun anyone away who came to her for help with their school work. She would always help them being the softhearted person she is. If you think of time where you helped somone, be it a friend. family member, they usually come back again and again when the required assistance, and earch time they comeyou help them, that's how Ida is if she can hel she will.

As Ida got older she continued to be softhearted and willing to help friends, family members, and even strnagers. Ida has always been someone you could count on for support. For instance every summer Ida would baby sit for her aunt and not charge her anything, because Ida love hleping out family.

Have you ever helped a friend or family member in need? Or even a stranger? You probly did this out of good inten[??] and wanted to be a good samaritan. Well, I applaud you! Well done! Ida is 5'3 in height, with long black hair, light brown eyes and a heart of gold. Ida happen to be my first cousin on my mother[']s side. Ida is a softearhted[spelling??] person who [will] always do anything to help anyone in need. [it could be a friend, family memver??, or a stranger. It [doesn't] matter to Ida.]

You need to watch your spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure.

You do the next two paragraphs. As a hint, now many times in the first three sentences of the next paragraph do you tell me that Ida was in school? Do you think you can restructure your paragraph to make it better?

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As a young girl in school Ida was always willing to help the other children, with there school work. For example, every Tuesday Ida would stay one hour after school to help any student with there math. She would always be willing to help, she did not want to see anyone fail a math test. Can you think of times where you helped somone, be it a friend, family member, or stranger, they usually come back ang and again when they requir assistance, and each time they come you help them, that's how Ida is if she can help she will.

As Ida got older she continued to be softhearted and willing to help friends, family members, and even strangers. Ida has always been someone you could count on for support. For instance, every summer doing the week for 4 hours a day from July until school started back in September Ida would baby sit her aunt five year old twin boys. Another example of how softhearted Ida is from November to the end of December she would volunteer at her local Hospital.

As an adult Ida further continued to be a softhearted person. Ida is now married with two children a boy four and girl 2 years of age. She works as a Medical Assistant at her local hospital her husband is a Doctor at the same Hospital. Ida has never let her havin a family stop her form helping other when she can. For example, Ida and I where on our way to pick up a cake for one of her children birthday party, but on the way we saw a car aciten Ida got out and went over to help.

It's easy to say no your own your own, but not my cousin Ida she is a very softharted perosn who is always willing to help someone in need, no matter if they are a firend, Family member or a total stranger. I applaud my cousin Ida for being so softhearted and alway willing to help.

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