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Srinivas sunki Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Please Correct email Draft - Urgent

Dear Teachers,
Please correct below email draft

"Dear Sir,
Good Morning,

Please be informed to you regarding below mentioned worker has joined in Hamad Hospital as emergency in this morning. Reason for he got Suddenly not being able to walk, speak, or move a portion of his body.

Name : Mohammed Guddu
Emp No : 513608

We will update his helth condition once confirmation we received from hospital."
  

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Hello, srinivas sunki — and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
srinivas sunkiPlease correct below email draft
Your reader will never have the patience to reach the end of your email. Have pity!

Dear Mr [surname],

Mohammed Guddu (employee no. 513608) was taken to the Hamad Hospital emergency room this m
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Thank you Sir

"I am very poor in English" I need to learn well.
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Dear Techer,

please correct below email draft. (Thanks for your prompt action always)

"Dear Sir,

Regarding my trial mail, Mr. Mohammed Guddu (Employee no.513608) discharged from hospital yesterday evening , as per Doctor sanction 2 days sicke leave to get recovery well.

Now his health is well and he will duty resume after two days.
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As I said above, you should use the recipient's surname in the greeting. If you do not learn from my teaching, my effort is wasted.
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