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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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We can see many newspaper advertisements of package tours almost every day. Some friends of mine go on package tours., but others do not. So, I would like to write about the pros and cons of package tours.
There are two advantages of package tours. First, we can go on package tours more cheaply than private tours. This is well known generally. Second, package tours make trips easier than private tours. We do not need to arrange by ourselves at all, when we go on package tours.
On the other hand , there are two disadvantages of package tours. First, we cannot always go to all the spots that we want to go to. In package tours, where to go is being decided beforehand. Second, we are always, for example when we are going sightseeing, eating, and of course being in the bus, along with the members of the tour. This annoy us without qustion.
As for me, I like private tours better than package tours. Because, when I go on a trip, I want to move from town to town by railroads as I please and to see the sights of the places that I visit by going on foot.
Which do you prefer package tours or private tours?
There are two advantages of package tours. First, we can go on package tours more cheaply than private tours. This is well known generally. Second, package tours make trips easier than private tours. We do not need to arrange by ourselves at all, when we go on package tours.
On the other hand , there are two disadvantages of package tours. First, we cannot always go to all the spots that we want to go to. In package tours, where to go is being decided beforehand. Second, we are always, for example when we are going sightseeing, eating, and of course being in the bus, along with the members of the tour. This annoy us without qustion.
As for me, I like private tours better than package tours. Because, when I go on a trip, I want to move from town to town by railroads as I please and to see the sights of the places that I visit by going on foot.
Which do you prefer package tours or private tours?
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- Some notes: advertisements for Do not start a sentence with so -- it is a dangerous habit.
- -- this is a useless sentence; delete it.
- is decided -- (delete being ) Put your long example (in the third paragraph) at the end of the sentence.
- This annoy s (add -s ) Do not start a sentence with becaus e -- it is a dangerous habit.
- Do not finish with a question.
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Some notes:
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Do not start a sentence with so-- it is a dangerous habit.
This is well known generally.-- this is a useless sentence; delete it.
is decided-- (delete being)
Put your long example (in the third paragraph) at the end of the sentence.
This annoys (add -s)
Do
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Do not start a sentence with so-- it is a dangerous habit.
This is well known generally.-- this is a useless sentence; delete it.
is decided-- (delete being)
Put your long example (in the third paragraph) at the end of the sentence.
This annoys (add -s)
Do
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