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Hasibrahman Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct any mistakes in my writing
I didn’t have the gut to tell my significant other that how much I loved her. My entire imagination was only on her. I couldn’t even think about anything else but her. Sometimes I dreamt of her even yesterday night I saw her in my dream. But, from now on I am not capable of dreaming about her because a son of a bitch has snached her away from me. My only regret is never have I been able to tell her the words of my heart that I had been cherishing for a very long time! The bird has flown away breaking the cage and built a nest on another branch.
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You've unnecessarily complicated your writing, and as a result, it doesn't make much sense. As a learner, you need to focus on the ideas, not on trying to impress the reader with your phrasing skills. You need to learn and consolidate the basics of grammar, vocab and natural phrasing.
- You've unnecessarily complicated your writing, and as a result, it doesn't make much sense.
- As a learner, you need to focus on the ideas, not on trying to impress the reader with your phrasing skills.
- You need to learn and consolidate the basics of grammar, vocab and natural phrasing.
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You've unnecessarily complicated your writing, and as a result, it doesn't make much sense. As a learner, you need to focus on the ideas, not on trying to impress the reader with your phrasing skills. You need to learn and consolidate the basics of grammar, vocab and natural phrasing.
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