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Hasibrahman Posted 6 years ago
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Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito. There are no such insects which love human being so much. If you feel lonely it will remove your loneliness by informing you to its buzzing sound.This sound is really annoying when it is close to someone's ears while he or she is sleeping. It drives us mad when it breaks our sleep. At that moment we try to kill it with anything close to our hands. After killing it we feel relaxed and get courage to sleep again. Some mosquitoes' bites are as painful as putting an injection. But at the end of the day we can say that they are our relatives because they carry our blood. It's also a main cause that prevents me from killing it. By the way they aren't sparing me right now, although I haven't written any derogatory remarks against them.
  

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Sometimes I am a bit hesitant when it comes to killing mosquitoes for there are no such insects that love humans so much like mosquitoes. If you feel lonely, their buzzing sound will help distract you from your loneliness. However, their buzzing sound can be very annoying, especially when it is too close to our ears while we are sleeping.

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  • Sometimes I am a bit hesitant when it comes to killing mosquitoes for there are no such insects that love humans so much like mosquitoes.
  • If you feel lonely, their buzzing sound will help distract you from your loneliness.
  • However, their buzzing sound can be very annoying, especially when it is too close to our ears while we are sleeping.
  • It is driving us mad when it disturbs our sleep, and when it happens, most of us would try to kill it with anything within our reach because only after killing it, we would feel relaxed and be at peace to go back to sleep.
  • Mosquito bites can be as painful as getting an injection.
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Sometimes I am a bit hesitant when it comes to killing mosquitoes for there are no such insects that love humans so much like mosquitoes. If you feel lonely, their buzzing sound will help distract you from your loneliness. However, their buzzing sound can be very annoying, especially when it is too close to our ears while we are sleeping. It is driving us mad when it disturbs our sleep, and wh

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