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What do you think of working abroad?
Many people are working abroad apart from their country. What do you think of working abroad? Are you for or against it? Now I'd like to write about the pros and cons of working abroad.
I think there are three advantages of working abroad. Firstly, we can learn the culture of the other country, for example the language, the food, the arts, and so on. Secondly, we can understand the culture of our own country objectively. The proverb says,"Outlookers see more than players". Thirdly, we may get a job that suits us in the other country. Everyone can't always get a job that suits him/her in his/her own country for some reason. Some people don't like manners and customs of their own country.
On the other hand , I think there are three disadvantages of working abroad. Firstly, we worry about our health, because there are differences in the living environment between our own country and the other country. Secondly, we worry that we can't communicate well with the people of the other country. If we can little understnad the language of that country, we worry about it much more. Thirdly, we fear for our safety in the other country. For we don't know how to protect ourselves in that country.
As for me, I'm interested in working abroad. I hope to communicate with the people of the other country, taste their food, and enjoy their traditional arts. So, if I were young, I would work abroad. But I am too old to do so.
What do you think of working abroad? Thank you.
Many people are working abroad apart from their country. What do you think of working abroad? Are you for or against it? Now I'd like to write about the pros and cons of working abroad.
I think there are three advantages of working abroad. Firstly, we can learn the culture of the other country, for example the language, the food, the arts, and so on. Secondly, we can understand the culture of our own country objectively. The proverb says,"Outlookers see more than players". Thirdly, we may get a job that suits us in the other country. Everyone can't always get a job that suits him/her in his/her own country for some reason. Some people don't like manners and customs of their own country.
On the other hand , I think there are three disadvantages of working abroad. Firstly, we worry about our health, because there are differences in the living environment between our own country and the other country. Secondly, we worry that we can't communicate well with the people of the other country. If we can little understnad the language of that country, we worry about it much more. Thirdly, we fear for our safety in the other country. For we don't know how to protect ourselves in that country.
As for me, I'm interested in working abroad. I hope to communicate with the people of the other country, taste their food, and enjoy their traditional arts. So, if I were young, I would work abroad. But I am too old to do so.
What do you think of working abroad? Thank you.
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Some things to fix: Away , not apart. The rest of your introduction should be deleted and redone. Don't re-ask the essay question; don't tell us that you are going to write about it.
- Some things to fix: Away , not apart.
- The rest of your introduction should be deleted and redone.
- Don't re-ask the essay question; don't tell us that you are going to write about it.
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- Delete ' I think '-- personalize the essay as little as possible.
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Some things to fix:
Away, not apart.
The rest of your introduction should be deleted and redone. Don't re-ask the essay question; don't tell us that you are going to write about it. The introduction consists of (1) topic background (describe 'working abroad') and your thesis statement ('Working abroad is enlightening / frightening because...).
Dele
Away, not apart.
The rest of your introduction should be deleted and redone. Don't re-ask the essay question; don't tell us that you are going to write about it. The introduction consists of (1) topic background (describe 'working abroad') and your thesis statement ('Working abroad is enlightening / frightening because...).
Dele
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