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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Please correct all the mistakes of the letter
Hello, my boss want me to reply to an organization whose job is to find foreign teachers. Please help me to correct all the mistakes and consider whether my letter words formally.
"Thank you very much for your effort in trying to find four new staff for our school. But we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her enthusiasm, teaching method and her cooperation with the school. Therefore if you cannot find any other teacher rather than Linda, we will accept only three new teachers for the next new school year."
"Thank you very much for your effort in trying to find four new staff for our school. But we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her enthusiasm, teaching method and her cooperation with the school. Therefore if you cannot find any other teacher rather than Linda, we will accept only three new teachers for the next new school year."
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But we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her enthusiasm, teaching method and her cooperation with the school. -- This seems illogical to me: you list only good qualities. Please clarify.
- But we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her enthusiasm, teaching method and her cooperation with the school.
- -- This seems illogical to me: you list only good qualities.
- Please clarify.
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But we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her enthusiasm, teaching method and her cooperation with the school.-- This seems illogical to me: you list only good qualities. Please clarify.
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Thanks for your comment.
I want to mention about her lack of enthusiasm (or can i say 'unenthusiasm), her lack of cooperation with the school , and her unsuitable method of teaching to our school's students.
Pleas help me.
I want to mention about her lack of enthusiasm (or can i say 'unenthusiasm), her lack of cooperation with the school , and her unsuitable method of teaching to our school's students.
Pleas help me.
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OK, then try this:
Thank you very much for your effort in trying to find four new staff for our school. However, we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her lack of enthusiasm, her poor teaching methods, and her failure to cooperate with the school. If you cannot find another teacher, then we will take only three new
Thank you very much for your effort in trying to find four new staff for our school. However, we cannot accept Linda for another one year because of her lack of enthusiasm, her poor teaching methods, and her failure to cooperate with the school. If you cannot find another teacher, then we will take only three new
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