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Two weeks ago, I went to Korea for my sister-in-law’s wedding.

Korean wedding is quite different from Japanese one.

It is shorter, and guests don’t eat during t ceremony.

Guests on the groom’s side usually wear suits and those on the bride’s side wear dresses or chimachogori, traditional Korean dresses. I wore a chimachogori.
In Korea, they never wear black for wedding like some Japanese do.
 
  

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Two weeks ago, I went to Korea for my sister-in-law’s wedding. Korean wedding is quite different from Japanes e' one. It is shorter, and guests don’t eat during t he ceremony.

  • Two weeks ago, I went to Korea for my sister-in-law’s wedding.
  • Korean wedding is quite different from Japanes e' one.
  • It is shorter, and guests don’t eat during t he ceremony.
  • Guests on the groom’s side usually wear suits and those on the bride’s side wear dresses ( you can be specific here as just "dresses" sounds odd ) or chimachogori, traditional Korean dresses.
  • I wore a chimachogori.
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Two weeks ago, I went to Korea for my sister-in-law’s wedding.

Korean wedding is quite different from Japanese' one.

It is shorter, and guests don’t eat during the ceremony.

Guests on the groom’s side usually wear suits and those on the bride’s side wear dresses (
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Two weeks ago, I went to Korea for my sister-in-law’s wedding.

A Korean wedding is quite different from a Japanese one.

It is shorter, and guests don’t eat during the ceremony.

Guests on the groom’s side usually wear suits, and those on the bride’s side
wear dresses or chimachogori, traditional Korean dress. I wore chimachogori.

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